Evaluation of the versions from Jonas and Hartmut:

Headline:

Jonas: EU Democracy Undermined by Council

Harmut: MEPs and Software Creators Protest against Undermining of EU Democracy by Unelected Legislators

Comments on Headline:

• Jonas:
  • Correct lengh, possible to take as an article headline as well
  • Emphasizes on a Scandal (Scaldals take front pages)
  • short and sharp, without attacking persons, it's the body itself which is bad
• Harmut:
  • too long for use article headline.
  • raises doubts like "Who are 'unelected legislators'?"
    • The national ministers in Germany are alos not elected, and they work on legislative texts like the council, so what gives?
  • people protest all the time, there is nothing new it it

Intro paragragraph:

• Jonas:
  • Interesting 1st sentence which grabs attention,
  • EU not a democracy